Dear fellow CoN entrant:
I have utmost respect for all of your efforts; truly. Previous CoN contests have taught me, however, that I will drive myself insane (literally) if I spend as much time commenting as I have in contests where there were less than 150 entries.
As I said, I know how much time and effort writing this piece may have taken you. I want to acknowledge and support the process by offering constructive criticsm.
My goal, therefore, is to choose one thing I love about your entry and one thing I might suggest changing.
Thanks for helping me become a better writer.