I'm trying to flesh out the story bit I posted previously, as well as finish up a rough draft of my PBSS.
Here's where I need help.
Can anyone link me to a particularly well-worded description, exercise, tutorial, on showing v. telling? Something with good examples - both of what not to do and how to fix it? (Yes, I know, practice is key, but how about a starting place? Snark, EE, Write Stuff, something?)
It's never been an issue that I've worked on, and after the original comments on my PBSS, I catch myself "telling" more than I would like.
Many thanks in advance!